This looks like a good BEGINNING to a visual style. I would like to see evidence of relevant research into character designs for products for your audience. I would also like to see evidence of character development. Rather than saying "here's the graphic style I will use" I would rather you to say this is the type of style or a rough direction for the final appearance. As I don't believe these designs represent enough visual development or characteristics that are required for your target audience.
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This looks like a good BEGINNING to a visual style. I would like to see evidence of relevant research into character designs for products for your audience. I would also like to see evidence of character development. Rather than saying "here's the graphic style I will use" I would rather you to say this is the type of style or a rough direction for the final appearance. As I don't believe these designs represent enough visual development or characteristics that are required for your target audience.
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